21 February 2013

first round of edits

Abraham's story is about to change.
His background wasn't coming together for me. It was too disjointed. Too unwieldy.

It's ok though, because I figured it out.

You know how sometimes a whole story will just come to you, complete? Yeah, it was like that. Abraham isn't a terribly communicative person, but he finally told me his story.

Thank freaking goodness.

Gramma Crow's recent excursion into town is changing, too.

The story of the Qinti and the mining company will be tweaked, while I'm at it.

I'll have the  revisions posted soon. 

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